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In a sheltered place, where the bitter North wind
Does not sweep the Earth and Autumn's frost lies
But light upon the ground, there, standing proud,
Once grew a tree of grace beneath the skies.
From gentle withy it grew, and green buds
Of leaf it spread to catch the morning's light
And dew. And so it grew, so prosperous
That its roots spread far, and such was its height
It dwarfed its fellows all around. The tree,
Though of great power, in one way was weak.
To sustain it, roots searched deeply and found
Deep in the ground a place where they must halt
And turn aside - the rock beneath was hard -
The roots could pry apart no seam or fault.

In a desolate place that holds no green
Nor flower, where the sun seems not to pry,
Still lives a tree of warped and stunted form
That, though sick and parched, does not want to die.
:iconchocolate-teapot:
*disclaimer* NOT MY PHOTO - I just used it as an illustration.

those who know me well will know what this refers to. Those who don't - just appreciate it for the effort I put in.
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:iconjayt11111:
Wow the picture and the story are beautiful!

The image itself is just simply amazing but the story added to it is just wonderful. I can see this is properly the best there is!

A masterpiece
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:iconakimbojoe:
Great photo!

j/k

But seriously, while I have no specific knowledge as to what this refers to, I can certainly identify with the feeling behind it. This is a great poem, tells a full and complete story... far better than my little ditties I must admit.

Well anyhow, take care.
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:iconmind-of-wings:
beautiful. I love it. The picture looks so desolate. Fantastic. Def a fav. Lovely lovely piece :floating:
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:iconchocolate-teapot:
hey thanks... but it's not about the photo, I didn't take that. The poem's my bit =P
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:iconamphy:
~Amphy Apr 17, 2004  Student General Artist
thats a really cool poem actually... pretty cool hidden message and very flowing^^ its a great piece good job:) :heart:
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:iconkazoey:
Although the meaning I don't know, love it alot I do. Seriously well done and well made.
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:iconchocolate-teapot:
thanks =) this is my favourite poem of mine
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:iconciril:
~Ciril Mar 19, 2004  Professional Photographer
you can do nothing more on this one.
i think it is perfect.
with stronger contrast you would destroy it.

and composition rocks!
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:iconchocolate-teapot:
*cough cough* erm. This isn't my photograph. It's merely an illustration I used for the poem...
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:icontrew:
It looks like a great location but the picture doesn't get the best of it... the tones are too weak, a stronger contrast would help. probably some photoshop levels would be fine for this. and while youre at it, enlargen the image, its too small
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